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Chapter 2 of 27

PUNARMRITYU: The Beast of Patala

Chapter 1: Patala

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He woke on stone.

Not the smooth stone of a hospital floor or the polished granite of a Mumbai apartment building lobby. Raw stone — rough, cold, the kind that has never been cut or shaped by human hands, the kind that exists in the bones of mountains and the floors of caves and the places where the earth has not been improved by civilisation.

His first sensation was cold. Deep cold, the kind that lives in the stone itself, that seeps upward through skin and muscle and settles in the marrow. His second sensation was weight — his own body pressing into the stone with a heaviness that felt wrong, as if gravity had been recalibrated while he was unconscious. His third sensation was fur.

Fur.

He lifted his hand — his hand that was not his hand — and stared at it.

The hand was smaller than his hand should have been. The fingers were longer in proportion, the joints more pronounced, the nails — not nails, claws — curved and dark. And covering everything, from fingertip to wrist and beyond, was a coat of short, dense, tawny-brown fur that caught the light from a source he could not identify and shimmered with an almost metallic quality.

He sat up. The motion was wrong — too quick, too fluid, his body responding with a speed and agility that his twenty-eight-year-old, office-chair-adapted body had never possessed. He looked down at himself and his mind, which had been processing the situation with the calm efficiency of shock, suddenly lurched into full panic.

He was not human.

He was small — a metre tall, maybe less. His body was compact, muscular, covered entirely in the tawny fur. His legs were shorter than his arms, bent at the knee in a way that suggested his default posture was not fully upright. He had a tail. A tail — long, prehensile, twitching behind him with a nervous energy that he could feel but not control, like a limb with its own opinions.

He opened his mouth to scream and what came out was not a scream. It was a shriek — high-pitched, primate, the alarm call of an animal that has woken in an unfamiliar territory and is broadcasting its distress to any member of its species within hearing range.

The shriek echoed off the stone walls. He was in a chamber — vast, cathedral-high, the ceiling lost in shadow. The walls were covered in carvings — intricate, ancient, depicting scenes he could not process in his current state of terror. The floor was the raw stone he'd woken on, and it stretched in every direction, punctuated by columns of carved rock that rose like the trunks of petrified trees.

And in the centre of the chamber, mounted in the ceiling high above, was a crystal. Massive. Pulsing with a warm golden light that was not sunlight but served the same function — illumination, warmth, the illusion of day in a place that had never known the sun.

He stared at the crystal. The crystal stared back — or seemed to, the pulsing light creating the impression of attention, of awareness, as if the light source was not merely functional but sentient.

His panic, having reached its peak, began to subside. Not because the situation was less terrifying but because the human brain — even a human brain housed in a non-human body — has a finite capacity for sustained terror. The amygdala fires, the cortisol surges, and then, if no immediate threat materialises, the system begins to downregulate. Arjun's system downregulated. His breathing slowed. His tail, which had been lashing with panicked energy, settled into a slow, uncertain sway.

He looked at his hands again. Flexed the clawed fingers. Touched his face — fur, a flatter nose, ears that were higher on his head and pointed, eyes that felt larger, a jaw that was wrong in a way he couldn't articulate until he ran his tongue over his teeth and found canines that were longer and sharper than any teeth he'd had before.

Vanara,* something in his mind whispered. Not a thought — a knowledge, arriving fully formed, as if it had been placed there while he slept. *You are Vanara.

And with the word came a cascade of associated knowledge: Vanara — the monkey-folk, the forest people, the warriors of Kishkindha, the race that had built Rama's bridge to Lanka, the children of Vayu and Brihaspati and a dozen other divine patrons. Hanuman's kin. The beings that existed in the space between animal and divine, between earth and heaven, between the gross physical and the subtle spiritual.

He was a monkey. A mythological monkey. In a stone chamber lit by a magic crystal.

I am dead,* he thought. *I died on the bus and this is — what? Heaven? Hell? A hallucination?

And then, at the edge of his vision, something appeared. Translucent, golden, hovering in the air like a notification on a phone screen — which was exactly what his brain interpreted it as, because his brain was a twenty-eight-year-old Indian brain that had been trained since childhood to process information through screens.

He focused on it. The golden icon solidified — two hands flanking a rising sun, the symbol of — what? He didn't know. But the icon was there, hovering, patient, waiting for his attention the way a push notification waits for a thumb.

He thought at it. Reached for it mentally, the way you reach for a notification — an automatic gesture, a reflex trained by ten thousand hours of smartphone use.

The icon expanded.


SHAKTI DARSHAN (Power Vision)

Jeev: Vanara — Mushti Vanar (Fist Monkey) Naam: Arjun Starr: 1

Prana (Life Force) — 10/10 Tapas (Endurance Heat) — 10/10 Siddhi (Spiritual Power) — 10/10

Gun (Attributes): - Bala (Strength) — 1 - Chaalaki (Agility) — 1 - Buddhi (Intelligence) — 1 - Pranashakti (Vitality) — 1 - Sahansheelata (Endurance) — 1 - Tejas (Spirit) — 1


He stared at the display. The display stared back, golden and patient and entirely real — or as real as anything could be in a situation where a dead man from Ghatkopar was reading his own stat sheet while wearing a monkey's body in an underground crystal-lit chamber.

Mushti Vanar, he read. Fist Monkey. Level one. Every stat at one. The cosmic equivalent of spawning into a game with nothing — no gear, no skills, no advantages, just a body and a baseline and the vast, terrifying openness of a system that could go anywhere.

He navigated the menu. His mind moved through it naturally — the interface adapting to his cognitive patterns, presenting information the way his brain preferred to receive it: clean, categorised, with expandable subcategories and a search function that responded to thought.

Vidya (Abilities):

Kriya Vidya (Active Abilities):

Agni Mushti (Fire Fist) — Prakar: Shareer (Type: Physical) — Tattva: Agni/Vayu (Affinity: Fire/Wind) — Srot: Jati Shakti (Source: Species Power) - Starr: 1 - Keemat: 4 Siddhi - Vivaran: The user's fist crackles with explosive prana. This strike adds devastating fire-wind damage to an unarmed blow. Requires 2 seconds to charge. May inflict Dahan (Burning) on target. Scales with Bala.

Chhaya Vidya (Passive Abilities):

Shakti Chori (Power Theft) — Srot: Devashish (Source: Divine Boon) - Starr: 1 - Keemat: Nil - Vivaran: Copy a passive ability from any target. Hold the stolen ability for one ghati (24 minutes). 5% chance to permanently absorb. Cooldown: one ghati. Does not break concealment. Permanently absorbed abilities reset to base level. One temporary passive held at a time.

Sahaj Vidya (Innate Abilities):

Anukool Darshan (Adaptive Interface) — Tattva: Nil — Srot: Devashish - Starr: 1 - Vivaran: Displays information in the format most comprehensible to the user. Adapts as user acclimates to surroundings. Can be customised at user's discretion.


He closed the display. Opened it again. Closed it. The action was comforting — a rhythm he recognised, the open-close of an app, the checking and rechecking of a screen. A behaviour from his old life persisting in his new one, a thread of continuity in the chaos.

OK,* he thought. *OK. I am dead. I am a monkey. I have a stat sheet. The stat sheet is in Hindi-English. I have a fire punch that costs four magic points. I have ten magic points. I can fire-punch two and a half times before I run out.

The absurdity of the calculation — the sheer, lunatic mathematics of applying game logic to what might be the afterlife — hit him, and he laughed. The laugh came out as a chattering bark, the Vanara equivalent of laughter, and it echoed off the stone walls and came back to him distorted, multiplied, as if the chamber itself was laughing with him.

Or at him.

He stood. The standing was easy — his new body was designed for it, the musculature balanced, the centre of gravity low, the feet broad and gripping. He was steady in a way his human body had never been steady, rooted to the stone with a stability that felt earned, genetic, the product of millions of years of evolution in a species optimised for climbing, jumping, and — apparently — punching things with fire.

He looked around the chamber. The carvings on the walls were becoming clearer as his eyes adjusted — or as his new eyes, which were larger and more light-sensitive than his human eyes, did what they were designed to do. The carvings depicted scenes from — mythology? History? Both?

He recognised some. Samudra Manthan — the churning of the ocean, devas and asuras pulling the serpent Vasuki around Mount Mandara, the poison rising, Shiva drinking it, his throat turning blue. Rama's army crossing the bridge to Lanka — and there, in the army, Vanara warriors, monkey-folk like him, carrying boulders and trees and weapons, their faces carved with expressions of fierce devotion.

And other scenes he didn't recognise. Battles in underground caverns. Cities built in the roots of mountains. Serpents the size of rivers coiling through passages of carved stone. Beings that were neither human nor animal nor divine but something else — something that existed in the taxonomic spaces between the categories his education had provided.

At the far end of the chamber, a passage opened. Dark, narrow, the carved walls giving way to raw rock. Water trickled along the floor of the passage — clear, cold, the sound of it amplified by the stone into a music that was not quite music, not quite speech, but something that his new ears interpreted as meaningful.

His stomach growled. The sound was comically loud in the vast chamber — a Vanara stomach expressing its opinion on the situation with the directness that stomachs are known for. He was hungry. Desperately hungry, the kind of hungry that bypasses thought and goes directly to compulsion, the body's insistence that whatever metaphysical crisis was currently underway, it would be addressed more effectively after calories.

He moved toward the passage. His body moved differently than his human body — lower, more fluid, his arms swinging naturally, his tail counterbalancing his weight with an elegance that suggested it knew what it was doing even if he didn't. The passage was narrow enough that he had to crouch, and he discovered that crouching was comfortable — his body's default mode, the position it had been designed for.

The passage twisted. Turned. Descended. The walls were damp, the air cool and heavy with the smell of stone and water and something else — something organic, green, the smell of growth in a place where growth should have been impossible.

And then the passage opened, and he stopped.

He was standing at the edge of a jungle. Underground. A vast underground jungle, lit by the same golden crystal technology as the chamber behind him — crystals embedded in the ceiling far above, casting a light that was warm and full-spectrum and sufficient to sustain the explosion of vegetation that filled the cavern from wall to distant wall.

Trees. Enormous trees — banyans and peepals and species he couldn't name, their canopies forming a green ceiling beneath the crystal ceiling, their roots plunging into soil that should not have existed this far underground. Vines hung from branches. Flowers bloomed in colours that his new eyes could see but his old eyes could not have — ultraviolet patterns on petals, infrared signatures in the bark, the visual spectrum of a primate whose eyes had been engineered for a jungle environment.

Birds called. Insects hummed. Water flowed — a stream, emerging from the rock wall and winding through the jungle, its banks lined with moss and ferns and the small bright flowers that colonise wet places in tropical forests.

And fruit. Fruit everywhere — hanging from branches, scattered on the ground, the jungle offering its abundance with the casual generosity of an ecosystem in peak production. His stomach growled again, louder, and his body — his new Vanara body — moved before his mind gave permission, swinging up into the nearest tree with a fluency that was not learned but inherited, climbing the trunk with hands and feet and tail as if he'd been doing it his entire life, which, in this body, he had.

He reached a branch. Plucked a fruit — round, purple-red, the size of a cricket ball, its skin smooth and warm from the crystal-light. He bit into it and the taste hit him like a memory: jamun. Wild jamun. The specific sweet-sour-astringent flavour of the Indian blackberry, the fruit that stained your tongue purple and your shirt permanently and that his grandmother had forbidden him from eating while wearing anything white.

He ate six. Then eight. Then twelve. The hunger was not human hunger — it was primate hunger, the deep caloric need of a body with a metabolism designed for constant movement, for climbing and jumping and, presumably, for punching things with fire. He ate until the hunger subsided and then he ate four more because the jamun were extraordinary — better than any jamun he'd ever tasted, concentrated, as if the fruit had been designed by someone who understood what jamun was supposed to be and had engineered the tree to produce the platonic ideal of the fruit.

He sat on the branch, his tail curled around it for balance, purple juice staining his fur, and he looked out over the underground jungle and he thought: This is Patala.

The knowledge arrived the same way the word Vanara had arrived — fully formed, placed rather than discovered. Patala. The seventh and deepest of the seven underworlds described in the Puranas. The realm beneath the earth, below Atala and Vitala and Sutala and Talatala and Mahatala and Rasatala. The place where the Nagas lived, where the Daityas and Danavas had their kingdoms, where the treasures of the earth were stored, where the sun did not shine but a light greater than the sun illuminated everything.

He was in Hindu mythology. Not reading about it. Not watching a Netflix adaptation of it. In it. Wearing a monkey body and sitting in a magic tree eating divine jamun in the underground realm that his grandmother had described to him when he was six years old, sitting on the floor of their Ghatkopar flat, eating actual jamun, while she told him stories about Patala and its serpent kings and its demon armies and its treasures beyond counting.

Aaji,* he thought, and the thought carried a weight of grief and wonder and the absurd recognition that his dead grandmother's bedtime stories were, apparently, a user manual for the afterlife. *Aaji, you were right about everything.

The jungle hummed around him. The crystal-light pulsed. And somewhere far below, in the deeper levels of the underworld, something stirred.


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