PUNARMRITYU: The Beast of Patala
Chapter 2: The Syphoning
The cart arrived on the third day.
Arjun had spent those three days doing what any sensible organism does when deposited in an unfamiliar environment: exploring, eating, and trying very hard not to die. The jungle was generous with food — fruit grew everywhere, the streams were clean, and his Vanara body processed the calories with an efficiency that his human body, which had subsisted primarily on vada pav and Maggi, would have envied. But the jungle was not safe.
On the first day, he'd encountered a snake. Not a snake — a Naga. The distinction was important. A snake is a limbless reptile that wants to be left alone. A Naga is a serpentine being the size of a water pipeline, with eyes that glow amber in the crystal-light and a hood that spreads wide enough to shade a small car, and it does not want to be left alone. It wants to know why you are in its jungle.
Arjun had run. His Vanara body was excellent at running — the quadrupedal sprint, the vertical escape up a tree trunk, the branch-to-branch swing that put distance between him and the ground-bound threat. The Naga had watched him flee with an expression that suggested it was not hungry, merely curious, and that his terror was mildly entertaining.
On the second day, he'd found the insects. Underground insects, evolved for a lightless environment that was no longer lightless, their bodies pale and translucent and their mandibles designed for processing the fungal growth that covered the deeper cave walls. They were the size of dogs. They moved in formations. And they were territorial in the way that colonial insects are territorial — not individually aggressive but collectively lethal, a swarm that could strip a carcass to bone in the time it took to scream.
He'd avoided them. Stayed in the trees. Eaten fruit. Slept in a hollow where three branches met, his tail wrapped around a limb for security, his body curled into the Vanara sleeping position that his muscles adopted automatically — compact, protected, the vital organs shielded by the curve of the spine.
And he'd practised. His one active ability — Agni Mushti, the fire fist — was pathetically weak at Level 1. The charge time was two seconds, during which his right fist glowed with a faint orange light and vibrated with a heat that was more warm than hot. The strike, when it landed — he'd tested it on a tree trunk — left a scorch mark the size of a chai saucer and cracked the bark but did not penetrate. Against the Naga or the insect swarm, it would have been as effective as throwing a lit matchstick at a charging bull.
But it was something. One ability. One weapon. One tool in a world that had given him nothing else.
The cart arrived at dawn on the third day — or what passed for dawn in Patala, the crystal-light cycling from dim amber to full gold in a pattern that mimicked the sun's arc and gave the underground world a rhythm of day and night that its inhabitants could organise their lives around.
The cart was pulled by creatures that Arjun's Adaptive Interface identified as Sharabha — eight-legged beasts, part lion, part bird, their bodies massive and armoured with scales that clinked like chainmail as they moved. They pulled the cart — a wooden platform on stone wheels, large enough to carry twenty passengers — along a path that had been invisible until the cart's wheels revealed it, the stone surface hidden beneath centuries of leaf litter and moss.
The cart was driven by a woman.
She was not human. She was not Vanara. She was — his interface supplied the word — Yakshini. Tall, broad-shouldered, her skin the colour of beaten gold, her eyes black from edge to edge with no visible iris or white. Her hair was pulled back in a style that was functional rather than decorative, and she wore armour — leather and metal, practical, the armour of a person who expected to use it.
She saw Arjun in his tree and stopped the cart.
"Naya hai?" she called up. New one?
Arjun, who had not spoken to another sentient being in three days and whose Vanara vocal cords had been producing nothing but alarm shrieks and satisfied eating sounds, tried to respond. What came out was a series of chattering clicks that conveyed meaning but not words — the Vanara communication system, which was gestural and tonal and perfectly adequate for a species that had evolved in jungle canopies but entirely inadequate for conversation with a golden-skinned cart driver.
She understood anyway. "Haan, naya hai. Chal, neeche aa. Cart mein baith." Yeah, new one. Come on, get down. Sit in the cart.
He descended. The descent was automatic — hands releasing branches, feet finding holds, tail providing balance, the tree-to-ground transition executed with a grace that delighted the part of his brain that had spent twenty-eight years being clumsy. He landed on the path beside the cart and looked up at the Yakshini.
She was enormous. Two metres tall, maybe more. Her arms were thick with muscle, her hands large enough to wrap around his entire torso. She looked down at him with the expression of a woman who had collected many confused new arrivals and found each one equally pitiful.
"Pahli baar Patala mein?" First time in Patala?
He nodded. Nodding worked. Nodding was universal.
"Kab aaya?" When did you arrive?
He held up three fingers.
"Teen din. Aur zinda hai. Bahut accha." Three days. And still alive. Very good. She said this without sarcasm — genuine approval, the acknowledgement that three days of solo survival in the Patala jungle was a meaningful accomplishment for a Level 1 Vanara with no training and no equipment.
She gestured to the cart. He climbed aboard. The platform was occupied by other passengers — beings of species he could not identify, none of them human, all of them looking at him with the cautious interest of commuters evaluating a new arrival on a morning train. A being with blue skin and four arms sat cross-legged near the front. Something that looked like a tortoise the size of a coffee table occupied the rear corner. Two creatures that resembled mongooses — but upright, bipedal, wearing what appeared to be woven grass clothing — sat together in the middle, their heads swivelling in unison to track his movements.
He found a space and sat. The cart lurched forward — the Sharabha resuming their steady pace, their eight legs moving in a pattern that was hypnotically regular, the cart rolling over the stone path with a vibration that reminded him, painfully, of the BEST bus.
The cart moved toward a structure. Through the jungle, following the path, the crystal-light growing brighter as they approached the centre of the cavern. And there, rising from the jungle like a mountain that had decided to be a building, was a pyramid.
Not Egyptian. Not Aztec. Indian. The architecture was unmistakable — the stepped profile, the carved gopuram at the entrance, the shikhara tower rising from the summit, the stone blackened with age but still showing the intricate carvings that covered every surface. Temple architecture. Dravidian style. The kind of structure you'd find in Thanjavur or Madurai or Hampi, built by dynasties that measured their ambition in tonnes of carved granite.
But this was larger than any temple Arjun had ever seen. Larger than Brihadeeswarar. Larger than Meenakshi. A structure so massive that the jungle grew around its base like moss around a boulder, the trees dwarfed by the carved walls, the canopy reaching only to the third tier of the stepped pyramid while the structure rose on and on, tier after tier, until the shikhara at the top nearly touched the crystal-studded ceiling.
The cart entered the pyramid through the gopuram — a gateway carved with figures of Nagas and Yakshas and Rakshasas and Gandharvas and a dozen other beings that Arjun recognised from his grandmother's stories and a hundred others he didn't. The interior was lit by smaller crystals set into the walls, their light casting shadows that moved — not because anything was moving but because the light itself pulsed, shifted, the crystals breathing with a rhythm that was organic rather than mechanical.
They passed through corridors. Past chambers where beings worked at tasks he couldn't identify — forges where metal glowed, libraries where scrolls covered every surface, training halls where the sounds of combat echoed. The cart descended, following a ramp that spiralled downward into the pyramid's interior, and with each level the air grew warmer, denser, heavy with the smell of stone and metal and the ozone tang of — what? Magic? Siddhi?
The cart stopped in a chamber at the pyramid's core. The Yakshini driver stood and addressed the passengers.
"Syphoning vibhaag mein aapka swagat hai," she announced. Welcome to the Syphoning Department.
The passengers disembarked. Arjun followed, his bare Vanara feet padding on the warm stone, his tail curled close to his body in the instinctive posture of a primate in an unfamiliar indoor space. They were herded — there was no other word for it — into a line that led to a desk, behind which sat a being that made the Yakshini look small.
The being was a Rakshasi. Female, immense — three metres tall, her skin dark green, her hair white and pulled into a crown of elaborate braids, her eyes red-gold and burning with an intelligence that scanned each new arrival with the efficiency of a barcode reader. She wore robes — administrative rather than martial, the garments of someone whose power came from bureaucracy rather than battle.
"Main Matron Mosri hoon," she said. Her voice filled the chamber the way water fills a glass — completely, leaving no space for other sound. "Syphoning vibhaag ki pramukh. Tum sab yahaan isliye ho kyunki tum mar chuke ho aur kisi devta ne tumhe doosra mauka diya hai. Yeh mauka muft nahi hai."
I am Matron Mosri. Head of the Syphoning Department. You are all here because you died and some deity gave you a second chance. This chance is not free.
She surveyed the line. Her gaze landed on each of them in turn — the four-armed blue being, the tortoise, the mongooses, Arjun. On him, her gaze lingered.
"Vanara," she said. "Mushti Vanar. Level ek." The corners of her mouth — which was very wide and contained more teeth than any mouth should — turned down in an expression that was not contempt but its professional cousin: assessment. "Tumhara koi devta hai jo tumhe sponsor karta hai?"
Do you have a deity who sponsors you?
Arjun shook his head.
"Koi gurukul ya sangh ka nimantran?"
Any gurukul or guild invitation?
He shook his head again.
"Koi purvaj ya vanshaj is lok mein?"
Any ancestor or descendant in this realm?
No.
Mosri made a note on a tablet — actual tablet, stone, with a stylus that left glowing marks on the surface. "Anath," she said. Orphan. The word was clinical, not cruel. A classification. A category in a system that processed the dead the way Mumbai's municipal corporation processed building permits — thoroughly, slowly, and with an emphasis on proper documentation.
"Tum syphoning mein jaoge," she continued. "Tumhari purani zindagi ki baaki hui shakti — tumhare karmon ka phisla hua saar — nikaali jayegi aur Patala ki arthavyavastha mein daal di jayegi. Yeh dard karega. Yeh tumhe kamzor kar dega. Lekin iske baad tum azad ho — apna raasta chunne ke liye, apni shakti banana ke liye, is lok mein apni jagah banana ke liye."
You will undergo syphoning. The residual power of your old life — the accumulated essence of your karma — will be extracted and fed into Patala's economy. It will hurt. It will weaken you. But afterward, you are free — to choose your path, to build your power, to find your place in this realm.
She leaned forward. The desk creaked under her weight. Her red-gold eyes found his and held them with the grip of a predator that knows the prey cannot run.
"Ya tum mana kar sakte ho. Aur hum tumhe Void mein waapas bhej denge. Woh andhera yaad hai? Woh hamesha ke liye hai."
Or you can refuse. And we will send you back to the Void. You remember the darkness? That one is forever.
Arjun remembered the darkness. The floating. The absence. The membrane between himself and his terror growing thinner.
He did not refuse.
The syphoning was exactly as painful as Mosri had promised.
They took him to a chamber below the processing hall — a round room, the walls covered in glyphs that glowed with a blue-white light, the floor a single piece of polished obsidian that was cold enough to burn. In the centre of the room stood a frame — metal, vertical, shaped like a doorway but leading nowhere, its surface covered in the same glowing glyphs.
They strapped him in. The straps were not for restraint — they were for support, to keep his body upright when the process knocked the strength from his muscles. A technician — a Naga, his serpentine lower body coiled beneath a humanoid torso, his hands precise and clinical — attached crystal nodes to Arjun's temples, his wrists, his chest.
"Yeh tumhare pichle janm ki shakti ko kheeche ga," the Naga explained. This will pull the power from your previous life. "Jo kuch bhi tumne kamaya — karma, punya, paap — sab extract hoga. Dard hoga. Lekin zyada der nahi."
Everything you earned — karma, merit, sin — all extracted. There will be pain. But not for long.
The machine activated.
The pain was not like any pain Arjun had experienced. It was not the sharp pain of the broken collarbone on the bus. Not the dull pain of a hangover or the burning pain of touching a hot pan. It was extraction — the sensation of something being pulled from inside him, from the spaces between his cells, from the marrow of bones he'd had for three days and the memories of a life he'd had for twenty-eight years. It was like having a tooth pulled, except the tooth was his entire previous existence.
He screamed. The Vanara scream — high, primate, the alarm call turned into a pain response, echoing off the obsidian floor and the glowing walls and the impassive face of the Naga technician who had heard this scream a thousand times and would hear it a thousand more.
It lasted — how long? Seconds? Minutes? Time distorted in the syphoning chamber, the glyphs on the walls pulsing with the rhythm of extraction, the crystal nodes on his body growing warm, then hot, then cool again as the process completed.
When it was over, he hung in the straps, his Vanara body limp, his fur damp with sweat, his breath coming in shuddering gasps. The pain faded — quickly, mercifully, the body's analgesic systems flooding him with the chemical equivalent of morphine, smoothing the sharp edges of the experience into a dull, retreating ache.
The Naga removed the crystal nodes. Unstrapped him. Caught him when his legs failed — the serpentine lower body providing a surprisingly stable platform for supporting a collapsed Vanara.
"Ho gaya," the Naga said. Done.
Arjun's Shakti Darshan flickered at the edge of his vision. He focused on it, expecting to see his stats reduced, expecting to find that the syphoning had taken something measurable.
The stats were unchanged. Level 1. All attributes at 1. Prana, Tapas, Siddhi all at their baseline maximums.
But something was different. The display showed a new line, one that hadn't been there before:
Syphoned Karma: 2,847** **Status: Processed** **Faction Standing: Neutral** **Designation: Free Agent — Patala
Two thousand eight hundred and forty-seven. The accumulated karmic value of a twenty-eight-year-old man from Ghatkopar who had lived an adequate life, told adequate lies, loved an adequate woman adequately, and died on a bus that the maintenance schedule had forgotten.
It didn't feel like much. But it was apparently enough to buy his freedom.
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